Thursday, November 3, 2016

writing

This week I have started a new piece of writing about my trip  to Thailand. My goal for writing is Personification Personal voice

 

e.g

My eyes were getting heavier by the minute.
All the chairs screamed
she sounded sweet like a strawberry.

I feel very happy about this writing and it is the best writing I have ever done. I have used all my goals.
Thailand writing




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1 comment:

  1. Mr ANovember 5, 2016 at 10:47 PM

    I thought this was really great writing Grace - when we went through it was more than evident that you know how to use personal voice and personification effectively. Such a talented writer!

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